Uncle Hector [SedesDiS] - 01

The bad news? Well obviously the dialogue here, at least in terms of it’s translation to English, is a complete disaster and near cringe in terms of the quality and nuance of their trainwreck delivery,which in this context is completely expository. And it very much needs to be re edited and reposted /published. The good news is more significant. The issues I have just described absolutely are problematic and integrity and narrative clarity should compel you to prioritize it as a goal and get it done. But they are fixes that can be done. There are some very good translators over on ATF who specialize in this very rare but crucial service and a professional translation from people this talented who are also not freaked out or offended by the progressive family dynamics of the plot, will pay off in dividends well known to commercial companies who control the branding of billion dollar Wall street properties. The good news doesn’t stop there. The visual design and camera angles and direction are above average in both character rendering (your sluts are surealistically hot and the positioning and flow of motion gives it an almost dreamlike vibe meets relentless dark comedy. Like the Cohen Bros if they had ended up working in the Adult Films industry. The other beacon of hope here is how the last couple of panels were presented, was some of the best conceived and executed I’ve ever seen in the comics medium , not just porn comics. But this creator (SedesDIS?) doesn’t require a beacon of hope, merely a professional translator specializing in fringe adult comics and fan cartoons and perhaps a little tough love editorial oversight. This stuff is much better than creators who have bigger profiles …. like that crappy quack artist known Mr Sweetcuck Amateur Hour. That guys comics are are a metaphysical joke, and deliver exactly the type of dumb comics every critic or opponent of this sub genre assumes would be typical of every comic on this site. But the real vote of confidence is that I myself am going to sign off now so I can read Ch 2 🤘